I'm a mixed-breed so I generally stay out of race crap since my opinion "doesn't count". However, I think you would be more accurate if you said "whiteness" is not ok instead of seemingky attacking a race of people. (I know thats not the intention). There are various races that subribe to "Whiteness" in that you use this term to describe a sociatal and self-valuation of significance.

Personally, I think the true color of privilege or "whiteness" as you put it, is green. If you have the right amount if green in your life, your race is irrelevant.

However, there is nothing inherently wrong with simply being born of a European descent, and notwithstanding the assignment after birth you did clarify, you article still seems to attack a race and that doesn't do anybody any good.

I mean this as constructive feedback and in good faith, you make some valid points. I just think you're a bit overly presumptive and as such, categorizing.